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Lonely
Contributed by
christyrachelle
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Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 02:10:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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My heart sings, My hearts breaks
A flower grows, a flower dies
My eyes shine with hope, they then with tears
The sun rises, the sun sets
I am walking in the clouds; I am in a cave, devoid of light
The sun is warm on my face, then a cold wind comes, and I shiver
Friends surrounded me, I am now alone
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2004-01-26 14:10:44]
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Re: Lonely
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by hawaii06 on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 02:14:59 PM AEST
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Very sad...but a very good write...keep em coming...
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Re: Lonely
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by Necromant on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 02:19:56 PM AEST
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Oh hw sad! Very vivid imagery hope you're better now. Great write!
Anne :D |
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