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SLAPS ARE IN ORDER, DON'T TELL ME I'M WRONG!
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 02:04:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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all i can do is face the world everyday,
with a smile on my face,
strutt around like i'm soo elegant,
like i'm soo full of grace!
year well you can fu** that sh**,
you c**t,
never in my life,
will i ever be soo blunt!
year,well,o'k,maybe,some times,i smile,
though normally, i can't be bothered!
at the moment i'm covered,
in devil's evil!
that's why i'm soo raw, and i wanna fight!
apart from the fact,
that you left the impact,
and i can't see what's right,
and my mind's all twisted and uptight!
and sure i'm not as naughty,
as the rest of you "bad bi***es",
but i still get gobby/abusive,
when i get angry!
AND YOU WONDER WHAT'S MY PROBLEM?
YOU CALL ME A STRESSY BI**H!
what's your's?
and why do you always have to start?
you WITCH!
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deathdrop
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2004-01-26 14:04:20]
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Re: SLAPS ARE IN ORDER, DON'T TELL ME I'M WRONG!
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by hawaii06 on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 02:17:49 PM AEST
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deep and emotional..it was good..
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Re: SLAPS ARE IN ORDER, DON'T TELL ME I'M WRONG!
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by Necromant on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 02:18:00 PM AEST
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Hmm This one is really angry! The words are well chosen Exept for one Witch? Is that supposed to be an insult? I hope its not hehe as for the other great write :)
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Re: SLAPS ARE IN ORDER, DON'T TELL ME I'M WRONG!
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by DJ_The_Young_Grasshopper on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 01:25:12 AM AEST
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| Nothing reads better than gangsta poetry:). Keep up the good work! |
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Re: SLAPS ARE IN ORDER, DON'T TELL ME I'M WRONG!
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 04:13:03 PM AEST
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| This was amazing sometimes I wish I could just up and say or even write these things, I give you props. You shouldn't have to deal with anything you don't want to and it's amazing how you can just say f*uc* you. |
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