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Did you know?
Contributed by
christyrachelle
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Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 02:02:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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We sit around. We talk and laugh.
I look into your eyes. I love you.
Then she walks over.
You smile and get up. You look into her eyes.
The two of you say goodbye and walk away.
You love her. Not me.
I cry.
I love you. Did you know?
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2004-01-26 14:02:51] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Did you know?
(User Rating: 1 ) by hawaii06 on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 02:12:31 PM AEST (User
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Very good poem...I loved it...it's sad but gets right to the point....Very good job...
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Re: Did you know?
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kie on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 03:11:11 PM AEST (User
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I think you did a great job composing this poem. Your point really stands out. I imagine its a tough situation to be in. All I can say is hang in there with the rest of us. |
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