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Breakup
Contributed by
CodyJ
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Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 01:35:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Were the stars shining that lonely night,
when I watched you walk away?
Was the wind even blowing on that night,
when I didn't know what to say?
Does the knife still hurt,
when you twist it deep inside?
Does the pain of your words still hurt,
when you slashed away my pride?
And if you were to go today,
could I help but cry?
And if you were to leave today,
where would your love reside?
I couldn't have been alive that day,
not after what you said.
'Cause if I was alive that day,
I wouldn't have left our bed.
And if it were to rain tonight,
I think I'd be all right,
cause if it were to rain tonight,
you wouldn't say goodbye.
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CodyJ
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2004-01-26 13:35:02]
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Re: Breakup
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by hawaii06 on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 02:07:38 PM AEST
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| very good poem..I enjoyed reading it...Keep it up.....Jamie |
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Re: Breakup
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by Necromant on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 02:24:41 PM AEST
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Oh i know what you mean. This poem is very touching. Goodbyes are usually devastating. Hope you're better now :)
Anne :D |
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Re: Breakup
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by Kie on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 02:51:14 PM AEST
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| Your poem was nothing less than incredible. The flow, your words were not only in harmony but so touching to read. A great write this one is. |
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Re: Breakup
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 09:06:49 PM AEST
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| Intereting write. Rather good though. I enjoyed reading this. Very sad though. |
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