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Locked by the invisible key.
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 01:22:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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"my thoughts" locked with anger,
"my world" locked with creed,
"my friends" locked with foolishness,
"my mind" locked with (bleep)!
"my heart" locked with darkness,
"my school" locked with stress,
"my emotions" fighting freely,
"my head" IS IN A MESS!
"my dreams" locked with nightmares,
"my fears" locked with pain,
by the invisible key and steel chains,i am tied,
"my rists" are stinging in vane!
even "my words" that come out of my mouth,
when i try to talk, but i say some thing else!
the only thing, that's not locked about me,
is the violent words, i say,
when i'm angry!
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deathdrop
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2004-01-26 13:22:23] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Locked by the invisible key.
(User Rating: 1 ) by Necromant on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 06:08:49 PM AEST (User
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Oh lol very real emotions, vivid imagery liked it a lot! you're very sincere! Great keep on writing!
Anne :D |
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