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Inglish
Contributed by
alecfernadez
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Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 11:36:11 AM in AEST
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Deconstructing the english language
A lack of conformity is what you see
Its what you find in this mind ***** sandwich
Of misplaced verbs that mean something to me
I dig shakespear and Allen Edgar Poe*
But I dont need to be that organized
Chaos and dysfunction is how I go
And I write the way I feel so even I'm suprised
Because I love the english language so much
That I have to destroy it to create
My own works of art built on a hunch
That no-one will nalyse the words that I make
And count everysingle gramatical mistake
I write about myself in my own style
English teachers and profesionals call it a state
They never compliment; Its been a while
Just becuase I dont follow the rules exactly
Doesnt mean I'm a mother ***** idiot
Because I know what I'm writing isnt correct
Its my ***** style, I aint no Blly elliot
Just respect me for breaking the boundaries
Between poetry and explict lyrical content
Because I will do so insubordantely**
Copyright ©
alecfernadez
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2004-01-26 11:36:11]
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Re: Inglish
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by emystar on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 12:24:21 PM AEST
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Very good work of art.
It's called poetic lisence.
People that critacize r jus jealouse,
Do your on thing and joke um if they can't take a good ***k.
I make up my own words-n-spelling.
We're all unique.
Keep up the good wrting.
huggs, luv,
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Re: Inglish
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 12:44:47 PM AEST
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BRAVO!BRAVO!BRAVO! i'LL THROW ROSES AT YOUR FEET!
Yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeewe have another poet at YPDC that does it his own way, and his own style......no set rules....just how he feels....and his heart comes singing through like a real trooperdo! Color outside the lines and have lots of fun...you are very secure...and I'm also one.....so lets forget what others can't realize......We know the Engelish language....but it's so fun to improvise!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I love exclamation points can you tell...........It's my way of over stating.....
and also giving a yell!
Wow......someday you will be very famous I know.....Keep up the good work......you're an Allrightjoe!
lovingcritters & poets who have real "Stile"
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Re: Inglish
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 5th February 2004 @ 01:50:21 AM AEST
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| ditto ditto ditto!!! *shouts hurray!* *5ers!* ...im with you, dunno what is their defugilty anyway, you know? heh, hugs n' love nessa |
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