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fierce intention
Contributed by
fallen_eyes
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Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 05:28:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A sudden grasp around my neck
A fear for I know not what will happen
The grasp tightens, His speed becomes fast
My head is dizzy, a small breath to be my last?
A sudden urge, I squirm, I dart
An intention so fierce and dark
I want to escape from the pain i now feel
Is this a nightmare or is it for real?
A dream of my life flashes past
One more breath i manage to gasp
Thats the worst fear, i cannot pretend
Not knowing when this torture will end
He wont let go, grasp gets tighter
hearing his voice, He dare not give in
I can see this will finish me soon
Alone in one dark forsaken room
I feel for the end is close now
I feel myself drifting away
His grasp is getting so deadly
My life is over for all to see
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Re: fierce intention
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by ArdRi79 on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 06:00:20 AM AEST
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| I didnt enjoy reading this it was too well written it gave me Nam style flashbacks very well done. |
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Re: fierce intention
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by forever_lonely on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 08:30:23 PM AEST
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hey pickle
wow what a great piece of writing, very very very vivid i could see what was happening there in my head
brilliant write hun full of everything id expect from someone of your most amazing talent
love
sausage xx |
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Re: fierce intention
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 07:52:56 PM AEST
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| Nice write. Very dark. I liked it. |
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