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compromise
Contributed by
venusonearth
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Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 03:34:07 AM in AEST
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How can I ever forget,
the anguished look in your eyes,
which said more than your silent lips
as you walked away from me.
How can I ever forget,
the tears flowing down your cheeks,
letting me know that you had been hurt.
I wish I could put back the clock,
retrace my steps,
on the sands of time.
But this burden of guilt,
is weighing me down.
So, please come back to me!
Can't you hear my voice,
crying for your forgiveness?
Or is the distance between us,
too much to bridge?
So,please let us meet halfway!
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2004-01-26 03:34:07]
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Re: compromise
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by emystar on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 04:53:18 AM AEST
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Very good inspiration.
Great work!
huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: compromise
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 07:48:02 PM AEST
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| Interesting write. Rather hopeful. I liked it. |
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