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Inside the mind of misery
Contributed by
Disenchanted_Poet
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Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 02:03:16 AM in AEST
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Inside this mind of misery,
Pain and anger everday,
Inside the thoughts I see,
Hate and anguish everyday.
Do the deaf hear their own screams?
Can the blind see their dreams?
Does a lonely heart still smile?
Do the broken down think about the next mile?
Inside the mind of misery,
In lies this serious mystery,
Who do you expect me to be,
When inside this mind you continue to judge me.
Why do the powerful look down on the weak?
Why do the strong continue to hurt the meak?
Why do the rich brush aside the poor?
Why do the dying wonder what they are living for?
At this moment I am not trying,
To show them who I am,
Why can't they see they are only denying?
They don't know me, they will never understand.
Misery is the mother with no child,
Misery is the father with no son,
Misery to some seems mild,
Misery to others replaces fun.
We all live in misery one time or another,
Maybe it was the loss of a friend,
Maybe the loss of a lover,
Why does misery never seem to end?
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Re: Inside the mind of misery
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by shelby on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 02:30:04 AM AEST
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this is great as far as the way you laid this out its so honest yet sad at the same time.iv often asked myself these same questions there is nothing worse than feeling in this way.
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Re: Inside the mind of misery
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by emystar on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 03:15:51 AM AEST
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Very good write as like u say, we all experience it.
Great write1
huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: Inside the mind of misery
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by Kittie on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 08:02:23 AM AEST
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| I liked it because its very true |
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Re: Inside the mind of misery
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by Necromant on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 11:33:08 AM AEST
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Very wise writing. Wonderful poem, You have talent! Agree with you it's something we all experience. Great write!
Anne :D |
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Re: Inside the mind of misery
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 07:43:08 PM AEST
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| Interesting write. It was good though. Nicely done. |
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Re: Inside the mind of misery
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by afraid_of_fear on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 07:54:37 PM AEST
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this is great.. the rhyming behind the words seems to enhance the poem more so.. love it..
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