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Forbidden Love
Contributed by
Elf
on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 09:40:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Kept in secret
quick to hide.
The two lovers
Do abide.
For her
It's treason,
For him
It's death.
As they hide
their unison breath.
But the threat
means not to them.
Nothing would be
enough to condemn.
Their love
is strong.
Even though
they know it's wrong.
Then in passion.
They are found.
Both are thrown
to the ground.
She is forced
to watch him die.
Still in shock
she does lie.
Her punishment is to know
the shame she did impart.
But,yea, she dies
of a broken heart.
Copyright ©
Elf
... [
2004-01-25 21:40:13]
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Re: Forbidden Love
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by Shadow on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 09:54:07 PM AEST
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| A tale as old as time. Yet brout to a new light by your words good job! |
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Re: Forbidden Love
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by PumpkinPie on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 10:05:24 PM AEST
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Wow this was really well written,so sad the end though...:( Nice job!
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Re: Forbidden Love
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by Necromant on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 01:10:35 PM AEST
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Oh terrible story! But I love to read tragedies and fantasy which mean I love this poem!
Anne :p |
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