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How Do You See Me?
Contributed by
callistonynaeve
on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 08:50:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Take away the smiling face
And the satin and lace
All thats left is me.
I'm not one to bow down
But I tend to favor a frown
This is what I am.
Though this may seem to be about you
There are other things that make me blue
Few others could make me feel like this.
To be happy and sad at the same time
Joy and grief run a very thin line
I feel so much at once.
You will always be in my heart
Even if you are there tearing it apart
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callistonynaeve
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2004-01-25 20:50:05]
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Re: How Do You See Me?
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 12:52:57 AM AEST
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OH MY!!!!!!!This is a very creative write. I've never read one quite like it. You have a very creative mind....and I really enjoyed reading this poem
The ending just made it and sealed it and now it's divine...
Thanking you for sharing your beautiful talent it is wonderful and fine
Lovingcritters
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Re: How Do You See Me?
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by Necromant on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 10:59:13 AM AEST
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Wow This poem is truely emotional! I love the way you described your feelings very truthful words and the ending is terrific ! Wow great write!
Anne :D |
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Re: How Do You See Me?
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 10:48:43 AM AEST
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| Nice write. Very interesting. It was good. In the end all there ever is is just the person. The rest doesn't matter anyways. |
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