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My Addiction
Contributed by
carebear
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Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 05:52:09 PM in AEST
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My addiction,
It's taking over me,
Taking away who I am,
Instead of someone I should be.
A left arm covered in scars,
My inner child was tortured,
I cry for release,
There is no beauty all is gone.
My addiction,
Nobody knows my secret,
No-one sees my falling tears,
They won't care if I bleed.
Endless nights of no sleep,
Thoughts of fear running in my head,
Would it matter if I were dead?
Hurtful memories just won't go.
My addiction,
One more cut to add,
Another tear to shed,
A hundred nights of being alone.
Copyright ©
carebear
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2004-01-25 17:52:09]
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Re: My Addiction
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by hawaii06 on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 05:54:56 PM AEST
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This is very sad and I hope you stop the cutting..Very good poem though..it's very deep and emotional...Keep writing!!!!!!
Jamie |
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Re: My Addiction
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by sicknivesevered on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 06:16:19 PM AEST
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| Groovyoovy. I rather liked the last line. |
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Re: My Addiction
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by teresa23 on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 06:20:57 PM AEST
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Hits you to know that there are people out there like this..Nicely done keep up the work
Teresa |
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Re: My Addiction
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 10:35:38 PM AEST
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this was very sad, but very good. Although I for one would 'care' if u bled and I think lots of other ppl would as well. Good poem never stop writing.
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Re: My Addiction
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 10:35:39 PM AEST
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this was very sad, but very good. Although I for one would 'care' if u bled and I think lots of other ppl would as well. Good poem never stop writing.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: My Addiction
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by blueheart on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 12:59:22 AM AEST
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| Rather sad but good work. |
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Re: My Addiction
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by shelby on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 02:02:28 AM AEST
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so very sad I can understand your pain and your inner child reaching out for comfort but I cant understand the cutting part (Im not saying that to judge you either) I only wish I did understand more so I could comfort you in some way or be of some help.Bobo is right there are many people who care if you hurt and bleed Im one of them.
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Re: My Addiction
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by alecfernadez on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 11:53:19 AM AEST
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| Wow I can understand what thats like. Excellent poem |
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Re: My Addiction
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by Necromant on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 12:40:00 PM AEST
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So sad, this poem really hit home! Perfectly written!
Anne :) |
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Re: My Addiction
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 20th February 2004 @ 02:14:00 AM AEST
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| Very good write. Very powerful. Very sad though too. I liked it. |
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Re: My Addiction
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 09:28:02 PM AEST
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| well said... i hope this is one habit you can break =) |
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Re: My Addiction
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by alwys2nv on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 09:34:14 AM AEST
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nicely written i can relate to this because....i also cut my self thinking no one would care if i am to bleed...keep up it up and i also hope that you can stop cutting.. i know its hard but its not the right way to express your self....
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