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Shades Display Instantly
Contributed by
Exodus-On-Life
on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 03:48:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Flowing everywhere, color instantly
Rainbows fall down with your smile
Brainstorming for something
Songs we will listen to for quite a while
The energy is flowing, sound so wonderfully
Fear subsides into the shadows of fade
Dreaming for unknown reasons
Our smile ventures to the shallows as we wade
Oh, beautiful heavenly angel of
You make me shade myself so naturally
The colors of your sun ring
And the warmth of your smile instantly
Flying through the crystal waves
Seeing clearly throughout this world
Falling even faster
Brainstorms of sunsets, twisting into the whirl
Love is so blind, and fading into me
Windows so frozen, the rain has to be
Beautiful
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Exodus-On-Life
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2004-01-25 15:48:53]
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Re: Shades Display Instantly
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by hawaii06 on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 03:53:43 PM AEST
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This is a very nice poem...and I loved reading it...it was great...Keep writing...
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Re: Shades Display Instantly
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 03:55:54 PM AEST
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| I found this very interesting. I had to read it twice tho to understand it better. Just wanted to let you know tho, that I like it. |
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Re: Shades Display Instantly
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by Mouth on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 05:44:07 PM AEST
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Breathtaking, absoulutly magnificent. Prose of a true poet. Love it!
Sarah |
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Re: Shades Display Instantly
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by Necromant on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 12:23:43 PM AEST
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Wonderful poem!! Very good! Vivid imagery! I lovef it!! Great talent!
Anne :D |
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