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Jordanna's poem.
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 02:57:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
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gobbines will never work,
with a face of fireful attitude,
nor will swearing out abuse,
or always being rude!
so why do we do it,
it don't make us look strong,
it don't make us look big neither,
so why do we shout when we get it wrong?
i know that answer,
even if you don't understand,
and i'll always know that answer,
even if you won't give us the helping hand!
i understand that answer!
only it does matter what you think!
because if you ever do anything,
it's always us that's gonna SINK!
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deathdrop
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2004-01-25 14:57:02]
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Re: Jordanna's poem.
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by hawaii06 on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 02:59:32 PM AEST
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Very good poem...It's inspiring to people still in school...like me...
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Re: Jordanna's poem.
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by Necromant on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 12:20:45 PM AEST
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Yeah, thoughtful poem! Good write!
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