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Helpless
Contributed by
positivelypurple
on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 12:14:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I am alone
It is getting late
A friend is supposed to meet
me at the gate
to my heart has been closed.
Running on empty I suppose
I can only dream of you
are in love with me. I am blue
skies between us
is a word not known.
I am alone.
The taste of your sweet lips
still lingers
The electrifying touch of your fingers
haunt me in my dreams
so beautiful it seems
you will not come here
I am waiting in fear
for love to disappear
into oblivion.
I go shattered at a loss
for words I am cross
plains, miles, land in between
you and I
want to cry
for our love has only grown
But still I am alone.
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2004-01-25 00:14:42]
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Re: Helpless
(User Rating: 1 )
by hazelnut on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 01:29:08 AM AEST
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i love your 'before and after' style
A friend is supposed to meet
me at the gate
to my heart has been closed.
I am blue
skies between us
is a word not known.
totally refreshing ! |
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Re: Helpless
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by PumpkinPie on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 01:38:43 AM AEST
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Yes indeed arefreshing great poem !I especially liked "I am waiting in fear
for love to disappear
into oblivion.
I go shattered at a loss
for words I am cross
plains, miles, land in between
you and I"
How nicely written,
PumpkinPie
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Re: Helpless
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 05:50:46 AM AEST
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| I loved the last two lines. Great poem. |
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Re: Helpless
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by Kie on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 02:51:54 PM AEST
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| Your poem brought tears to my eyes. I empathize with you, I know its very hard to get thru. I really liked your poem alot. Hang in there. Kie |
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