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It Takes Two Too Tango
Contributed by
Jacktripper
on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 08:57:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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“Venga corazon”
Come my love,
Let your luscious legs long for elegance.
Ravage my soul,
Restless roses release my lips essence.
“Dime su mano y mira a mi cara!”
Give me your hand and look at my face,
Sensuous, sultry, seductive motives bloom.
Desperate eyes watch our bodies move,
Curious caressing carries on our tune.
“Yo quiero to amor,”
I want your love,
Russian rhapsody reviving realms of romance.
Tangle in to my footsteps,
Temptress taunting twists toward my stance.
“Por favor dime su corazon…”
Please, give me your heart,
Gracious gem gazing heaven’s gates.
Dance in my eyes,
Artistic actress animating, the Tango’s heartaches.
“Otra Vez mi canto… en la Tango…”
Again I sing.... in the Tango...
"Venga mi corazon"
Copyright ©
Jacktripper
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2004-01-24 20:57:01]
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Re: It Takes Two Too Tango
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by Elf on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 10:06:47 PM AEST
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Good write. Like it. Tells a story of beauty, grace, and passion. I can almost hear the music playing softly in the background.....
-*Valen*- |
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Re: It Takes Two Too Tango
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 10:13:16 PM AEST
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Great use of alliteration!!! Loved this..
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Re: It Takes Two Too Tango
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by emystar on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 03:03:15 AM AEST
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Very good.
She sounds luvly as the poem is.
Jus simply beautifull.
good luck.
huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: It Takes Two Too Tango
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by poetrygodslove on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 11:00:59 AM AEST
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| mmmmm I bet she liked your poem... did another tango after words I bet..lol...good write. sandy |
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Re: It Takes Two Too Tango
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by PumpkinPie on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 03:33:36 PM AEST
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Wow excellent poem jack !I sure hope you showed this to your girlfriend,she'll probably melt in your arms...Who wouldn't?It makes one dream of romance as sweet as chocolate and as pure as nature.Thanks for the beautiful write,
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