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Depression Takes Over
Contributed by
sweetpeall
on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 04:04:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I feel like a piece of trash
something that has been passed around
I want to jump off a building
and crash into the ground
my heart is so broken
I don't know what to do
please don't forget
I will always love you
I can't go on living this life
I have no choice
but to pick up the knife
I know this will cause
some people in pain
but I feel so empty
I think I am insane
I love you so much
and that's no lie
but I give up and want to die
you deserve so much better
you deserve so much more
I pick up the gun
and fall to the floor
I guess this is where everything has to end
you were a great guy
and a wonderful friend
Copyright ©
sweetpeall
... [
2004-01-24 16:04:22]
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Re: Depression Takes Over
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by garyh on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 05:20:15 PM AEST
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| good write... but just remember no one is worth dying for... |
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Re: Depression Takes Over
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 05:08:02 PM AEST
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In agreement with the first comment, but I can relate to this totally keep on writing. i loved the poem all around
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Re: Depression Takes Over
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 18th February 2004 @ 06:06:54 PM AEST
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| Good write. If you can love then you aren't empty. Maybe just a little numb. I know these feelings all too well. |
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