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I Want To Be Held Again
Contributed by
hottkornstar
on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 02:07:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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People standing watching me
What it is they want to see
I don’t know of, but I question their
Wanting, needing, having to stare
They don’t let me out of sight
They think that I, that I just might
Betray the one I know the best
But hey, I love him more than the rest
They think that I am insane
And questioning things run through my brain
The only thing I want in life
Is to be held again.
People care not about what I feel
They only want what they think is real
If sanity is what I must steal
Well then I will to be held agan.
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hottkornstar
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2004-01-24 14:07:27]
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Re: I Want To Be Held Again
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by hawaii06 on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 02:11:45 PM AEST
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that is so true..I an see every aspect of what you wrote in your poem...and I htink that you are a good writer and should continue to write...never stop!!!!!!
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Re: I Want To Be Held Again
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by Kie on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 05:52:30 PM AEST
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| This is the first time I have read anything of yours. You expressed to the reader how you were feeling. You did great, keep it up. Kie |
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Re: I Want To Be Held Again
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by Craze on
Friday, 6th June 2008 @ 10:28:02 PM AEST
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Through your style I feel as though you are a powerful person and don't like people to tell you what to do, but thats just a guess ha ha but still a great write.
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