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Pals
Contributed by
CodyJ
on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 11:36:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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My trials, my pain,
my c'est livre.
My health, my happiness,
my sense of ease.
My strength, my courage,
my brash commitment.
My hope, my faith,
my penchence for argument.
My will, my style,
my graceless attitude.
My loyalty, my life,
my endless gratitude.
Four years a lifetime,
brothers to the end,
and after all that we've been through,
I'm proud to call you friend.
Copyright ©
CodyJ
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2004-01-24 11:36:26]
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Re: Pals
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by hawaii06 on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 11:39:35 AM AEST
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| Very good poem..I hope to see more from ou soon.... |
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Re: Pals
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by faith_my_eyes on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 11:39:56 AM AEST
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| wonderful write. I enjoyed all the emotions named. |
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Re: Pals
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 12:01:20 PM AEST
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The ways you describe them are not the typical friend descriptions you'd hear.... "brash commitment", "sense of ease", "graceless attitude".... they're all really interesting thoughts. I enjoyed reading this =) Well done
God bless,
Ellen |
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