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SUNNY DAYS
Contributed by
emystar
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Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 05:36:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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2 my one-n-only Tarzan
thinking ahead
when we part
that Delta bird
will take me
away.
Although
knowing time will fly
behind me will be
my heart.
So now
is thing that matters
while we share our
heavenly bliss,
Touching each star
twinkling bright,
All our dreams
no longer scattered.
So my love
when you
reach out
there's nothing left
but memories
Remember
sunny days
cool nights
together.
Love in our
used but true hearts
Sunny days,
think only good,
Remember,
playing in waves
at Daytona beach .
sunny days will
make it better.
4-ever luv,
your Jane
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emystar
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2004-01-24 05:36:57] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: SUNNY DAYS
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jacktripper on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 06:40:19 AM AEST (User
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This was interesting... could be a song? Sunny days has such a warm feeling.... You could use a little more description of what made sunny days. The rolling on the beach sand.... Stuff like that... Nice job we all wish for sunny days.... |
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Re: SUNNY DAYS
(User Rating: 1 ) by loveisendless on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 07:03:04 AM AEST (User
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SWEET & REASSURING! IT TAKES A GREAT HEART TO GET ONE!! VERY NICE POEM!!! |
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Re: SUNNY DAYS
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 11:25:10 AM AEST (User
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*Smile* This brings such a warm feeling to me grrlfriend....(ooops..Jane) Hang on to those memories...they'll make you smile so often as you go along life's journey..
Hugs always,
Jenni |
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Re: SUNNY DAYS
(User Rating: 1 ) by faith_my_eyes on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 11:27:07 AM AEST (User
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This is a very sweet poem. I hope it conjured up those happy memories for "Tarzan"!
God bless,
Emily |
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Re: SUNNY DAYS
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kie on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 12:18:20 PM AEST (User
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So romantic, sweet endearing. A lovely write Emy. Kie |
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Re: SUNNY DAYS
(User Rating: 1 ) by sweetangeluk on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 05:48:49 PM AEST (User
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Lovely and such a sweet poem
love Angelxxx |
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Re: SUNNY DAYS
(User Rating: 1 ) by Balmain_Tiger on
Tuesday, 14th November 2006 @ 06:09:25 AM AEST (User
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Through the pages I read your words, I see the changes that time does make. Keep on writing for as long as it does take. |
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