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BE STILL MY HEART
Contributed by
emystar
on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 01:49:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
BirthdayPoems
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Once upon a Valentine's
Day there was this
man named Jake
Every Valentine's he
gets a birthday cake.
He thought sure he'd die
before 50 cakes
this cassanova named
Jake.
51 years he's survived
much 2 everyone's
surprize!
He plays his guitar
while angels sing.
Words flo from
his heart
'bout luv-n-all
them things
Women swoon from
his elequate
writes
Every time
his pen ignites!
4 eternity
his words
will flo
touching
each-n-every
soul!
BE STILL MY HEART
Happy Birthday
ole
fart!
still your #1 fan
huggs, luv
emy
2 those who know me can remember who Jake is but those that don't know can go to archives-n-search
emystar
Copyright ©
emystar
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2004-01-24 01:49:58]
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Re: BE STILL MY HEART
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 02:10:07 AM AEST
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Oh Emy
this was just delightful.....I don't know who he is to you.....but whomever he may be.....he is lucky just to know a poetess like emy!
Wonderful poem.......made my heart smile
consue
and a happy day to Jake.....whomever he is! |
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Re: BE STILL MY HEART
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by loveisendless on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 07:05:22 AM AEST
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| IT'S GREAT TO SEE SOMEBODY WRITE SOMETHING SO NICE! |
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Re: BE STILL MY HEART
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by Jacktripper on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 08:18:57 AM AEST
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| Well once again you've enchanted me with your beat rhyme poetry. It's so tasteful how you put the words together to make it harmonious. I'm telling you a childrens book is crying for your attention. I'll help you write it I have some suggestions.... Great poem or song lyrics ;)' |
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