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Chris
Contributed by
ChriszBabiie1570
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Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 04:05:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Alone in the dark
sitting in my room
i think back and remember our spark
and the bright glare of the moon
that night couldnt have been shorter
it seemed the hours just rolled away
i try to only rememver the good you
but on the bad would stay
When i try to say how i feel
it seems i choke on my words
i cant see how this is real
i try to tell you and its all a blurr
So i need to forget
and you need to forgive
cuz i got nothing from you
and i have so much to give
Copyright ©
ChriszBabiie1570
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2004-01-23 16:05:37]
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Re: Chris
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by MissTea on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 04:18:44 PM AEST
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WOW! very well writing! I'm sorry about the pain that was put into this poem and what u are still feeling. I pray that a time of healing will surface!!
God Bless!
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Re: Chris
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by jeanie on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 04:42:40 PM AEST
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AH, how GOOD one! It tells alot of pain and comes from a suffering heart, I hope it will be healed soon! :)
*Huugggyy*
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Re: Chris
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by hawaii06 on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 05:35:07 PM AEST
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I hope your pain goes away and that he turns to the way he was before...
Good Poem...Keep writing...
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