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I Am A Poem - Part 2
Contributed by
limpingunicorn
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Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 02:53:38 PM in AEST
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didactic
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I'm the cuckold husband, the battered wife,
The indifferent, flesh-raping knife,
The friendly smile, the helping hand,
The burning hell, the promised land
I am the present, I am the past,
I am the first and I am the last
I am the future bleak as death,
I am your loved one's dying breath
I am the one who's always there.
I am the one who'll always care,
I am the nightmare, drenched in blood,
I am the child bereft of food,
I am the love you dream in dreams,
I am the pain you hear in screams,
I am your friend, your vilest foe,
The secret no-one else must know,
I am the rose without a thorn,
I am the one who died unborn,
I am salvation's mighty yell,
I am the small, sad voice from Hell,
I am deceitful, I am true,
I am a poem - I am you
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Re: I Am A Poem - Part 2
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by PumpkinPie on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 03:01:46 PM AEST
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This is truly a beautiful poem....I loved it to it's last sentence...You have a gift in writing,I truly appreciated your subject as well as the flow of this poem..W.O.W is all I can say,thanks for giving me such a nice read !
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Re: I Am A Poem - Part 2
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by kieran on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 03:48:25 PM AEST
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fantastic, what a brilliant idea for a poem, and it pans out really well as well! nicely done
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Re: I Am A Poem - Part 2
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 08:31:48 PM AEST
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I am a comment, I am true
I am another, point of view
I am sending, this to you
I am hoping, you'll construe
I am liking, what you do
bob |
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Re: I Am A Poem - Part 2
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 11:19:20 PM AEST
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| love this, both poems very cleverly exceptional, never stop writing! hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: I Am A Poem - Part 2
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 11:54:00 AM AEST
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I always have enjoyed your poetry. A lot. You choose subject matter that's off the beaten path, yet you craft it into works of art like this. This would make a good slogan or banner for the site, honestly.
Very well done. Glad I got to read this one.
Devoured by a swarm of locusts,
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