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UN-beautiful
Contributed by
dreamz
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Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 12:48:40 PM in AEST
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Being a teenage isn't all it's cracked up to be
There's so many pressures others just don't see
It's so hard to try to fit in
It's all about being beautiful, being thin
Christina Aguilera says "You are beautiful, no matter what they say"
But how can she know? She hasn't had to go through life feeling rejected every single day
In today's world zero is not just a number, but the ideal size
It's all about having blonde hair, blue eyes, longs legs, big boobs, and nice thighs.
People say I'm lucky because I have true beauty - "the beauty within"
I've tried to accept that but I go through life not fitting in.
Somedays I wake up thinking of this ugly life I dread
Somedays I think I might rather be dead.
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dreamz
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2004-01-23 12:48:40]
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Re: UN-beautiful
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by ArdRi79 on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 01:36:28 PM AEST
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This is very good social commentary I enjoy the way it isnt preaching from a pedistal, for the record inner beauty is worth far more, shallow self centered people are annoying and usually fools that sacrificed whta they want to look good...
ahem... good poem |
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Re: UN-beautiful
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by ChriszBabiie1570 on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 04:10:50 PM AEST
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| beauty is but skin deep.. and im sure u realize this.. i mean u may not think you are as beautiful as the size 0 blonde chicks u see but u are just as beautiful... and im sure lots of ppl see this.. u are as beautiful as u preseive urself.....a very nice write!! |
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Re: UN-beautiful
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 12:39:52 AM AEST
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| I know exactly what you mean. |
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Re: UN-beautiful
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by shelby on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 02:24:13 AM AEST
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your beautiful just the way you are sweety. I know there are alot of pressure on teens these days and I wouldnt want to be a teen again tis true. Ya know it is hard on us older females as well all this light on perfection perfect body perfect job perfect everything being a mother a career woman bla bla bla yes your wise beyond your years and keep your heart because in the end thats where the beauty shines from!!
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Re: UN-beautiful
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 04:53:34 AM AEST
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I'm glad you write instead.
"The Cares of life carry us
like a deadly blowing wind
but when we feel like giving up
we talk unto our friends"
Don't give up, get stronger from the expirience by usining your hard times to be an example for those who don't know how to. |
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Re: UN-beautiful
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 10:23:26 AM AEST
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| I know what your talking about. It's hard being a teenager, but i wonder if it's any easier when your in your 20's? I kind of doubt it. From what I've seen, being an adult isn't that great either. |
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