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''MY LIFE'' read all about it!

Contributed by deathdrop on Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 07:16:51 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

i'm a law breaker,
i'm a truancey maker!

that's me,
read about me, inside, out,
say what you want,
you can't make me shout,
i always say i've had enough!
but what i say, i do,
most just say it,
to scared to do it!

but now i'm doing it!
schoolz sh** ,
and they don't understand me!
i've had enough of it!

now i do it, the big talkers don't compare,
apart from the drink,
and the fights,
they are all just talk...
whisper's from here and there.

now that i do it,
i'm told i'm wrong,
so what would you do,
if you were me,
would you stop?
or carry on?

i guess i wanna be notest,
some one to realise, for once,
i ain't a quiet person,
wish they'd see and not be BLUNT!

i want them to help me,
to see me as i am,
self harm don't give me the kick!
and if i run away, i may be STABBED!

Copyright © deathdrop ... [ 2004-01-23 07:16:51]
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Re: ''MY LIFE'' read all about it! (User Rating: 1 )
by Jacktripper on Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 08:01:28 AM AEST
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You know this poem is very close to slam poetry... The first part is excellent. "That's me read about me, inside out" You let go of that steam towards the end. This is Eminem's style of rap lyrics too. This could be sold as rap lyrics definitely. No offfense... It's impressive music and poetry go hand in hand. You should put a little about your run ins with the cops. Stay consistant with the rhyme scheme towards the end you lost it. Hey I'm writting so much because truthfully I'm impressed so please don't be offended. Don't be afraid to write back with comments or questions. Great job keep it up!!!

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