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...to break away from the rhyme...
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 08:35:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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...to break away from the rhyme...
So many things have happened dear,
and none of them were good.
I told you I would never
again risk something so far.
You have re-confirmed that belief.
And I have nothing left to give.
And I feel so bad,
but now
I want nothing to do with you
or what you do.
Because you made me stop caring.
And it feels so much better.
So go buy a bigger blade.
You'll get no sympathy from me.
I'm in the same place.
And go find that cliff in Melba.
And as you fall,
feeling the margarita flowing over your body
Be sure to think of someone
who is able to deal with
everything
that is flitting,
fleeting,
and confused
inside your head.
But don't think of me.
Copyright ©
SensitiveSoAbused
... [
2004-01-22 20:35:08]
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Re: ...to break away from the rhyme...
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 12:33:18 AM AEST
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Hmm this was interesting don't know who it was written to or what 'inspired' it, but it was good
'And as you fall, feeling the margarita flowing over your body' perversely I seemed to enjoy those lines.
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Re: ...to break away from the rhyme...
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by MissLee on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 10:49:35 AM AEST
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| Goodbye..Just a thought before I stop talking to you, I do not hate you and please keep on writing your poetry, I will not comment again do not worry. |
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Re: ...to break away from the rhyme...
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by Cobalt on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 01:45:42 AM AEST
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| This was good man and how I can relate. I really liked this. Nice write. I hope it gets better for you. Everything just seems to get worse and worse for me. It'll be ok though I always make it through somehow someway. Good luck man. |
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