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The Truth
Contributed by
saddarkgirlreingsthenight
on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 07:50:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
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am i just to young to hear the truth?
do u not trust me?
i don't understand why u lie to me!?!?!
i just learned how to trust again,
when all these lies come crashing in.
my friends divided, united against me.
my one guy friend that i trust, lost from me.
i just don't know what to do.
so i turn to isolation, and self mutalation.
the cuts tell the truth,
not to trust one of U.
so my arms tell my story and
i want the truth.
but i don't think it will happen,
so i weep and i cry,
for the hurt and the lies.
just wondering if i will ever be
good enough for the truth.
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2004-01-22 19:50:17]
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Re: The Truth
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by whisper-of-night on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 11:02:52 PM AEST
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| The truth is..... I DO CARE......... what do you get out of from cutting youself? Only more blood to flow with your tears........ What do you get out of self mutalation? Only more sorrows add to your grieves...... that is all it does, nothing more, nothing less, nothing about the truth, except pains....... so please, hurt youself no more, and allow us to help you......... |
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Re: The Truth
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by Cobalt on
Sunday, 15th February 2004 @ 01:40:41 AM AEST
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| This was very well written. If that was a friend of yours that commented as well let them help you. They seem to be there for you so let them be. Don't let it be too late. Eventually it can be. |
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