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Contributed by
lonesomerose
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Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 06:39:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Caught somewhere between here and there
a rolling tide of new times wishes and dreams
carried along floating upon high on butterfly wings.
Chasing dreams some may say life wouldnt be
worth alot of living if you didnt take time to float away take chances with this life you live today.
Searching for something maybe a bit out of reach
still striving to find what it is your looking for
holding on with all your might giving the good fight.
Somewhere in the middle is where you reside
looking for that solice only you can find
another place another time to complete the ride.
Copyright ©
lonesomerose
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2004-01-22 18:39:14]
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Re: no title
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 07:23:49 PM AEST
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| a powerful whispy charming poem, may i be so bold as to offer a title for it? 'chasing dreams'...... hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: no title
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by Baronhawk on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 02:26:35 PM AEST
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| A quaint depiction of the limbo that is the life of most people today. floating along in that threshing currents of the river called life...not enought time to make sense of what we see on the banks all around and not enought time to matter to things that we find...everything moves..on...well at least that is what I get from this...a rather floating feeling you can say. All in all a nice piece of work. |
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