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NOBODY KNOWS
Contributed by
SWEETPEALL
on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 05:50:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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This pain this hurt
locked away in my head
nobody knows how inside I'm dead
blood on my wrist
there is glass in my hand
nobody knows
they cannot understand
they don't listen
so they cannot hear me cry
nobody knows
i just wish I could die
shaking fingers
grasp this plea for release
nobody knows
how the pain will not cease
sadness bleeding
emptying to the floor
nobody knows
I always craved for more
bleeding slowly
until my wound will close
dying slowly
nobody knows
Copyright ©
SWEETPEALL
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2004-01-22 17:50:50]
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Re: NOBODY KNOWS
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by hawaii06 on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 05:56:19 PM AEST
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very deep and I see where you're coming from....keep writing..
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Re: NOBODY KNOWS
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by shelby on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 06:20:26 PM AEST
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intense write this is dont give up and keep on writing it out
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Re: NOBODY KNOWS
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by saddarkgirlreingsthenight on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 07:27:47 PM AEST
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u r reading my mind, i swear. this hits home. u can write so good. i hope u keep writing cuz u have an awesome talent.
WWP
SWK
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Re: NOBODY KNOWS
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th February 2004 @ 03:24:22 PM AEST
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so sry it took me so long to comment, but i absolutely LOVE it, i swear you read my mind, and the minds of many others. this is my favorite suicide poem. great job- would love to see more.
-A lonely depressed girl |
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