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-My Rose-

Contributed by Asatru on Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 03:31:46 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Can't release you from my mind,
Get you outta my head,
Flip through my phone,
Always start and end on you,
Can't release myself from your thought,
A smile I've stolen,
For my own greedy purposes,
This picture is for me to stare,
What a last resort,
No resort,
Not last today,
First here in,
A person to be in my life,
I hope forever,
Cause she know what it's like,
To sing these blues,
Ignorant fathers shared,
Annoying sibling that we both have,
A mother who only knows no,
Friends as animals,
Animals as friends,
But you have what I don't
Meaning I know this is unrequited,
You have beauty,
I've only passion,
An empty passionate soul who burns for beauty,
Countless tears have I dropped for beauty,
But those Sucubi only revealed a face,
You've revealed so much more,
Beauty of the soul,
Heart and mind,
Making this flame burn,
With such compasion for you,
Most people would say,
Love comes from the heart,
Or someone has stolen their heart,
But you are my heart,
The definition of love,
Without you I've only a null space,
...I wish you were here,
Fly away in this truck with me,
Go where ever you want as long as I,
Can keep your picture with me,
And,
And maybe you don't want to hear this now,
But I have liked you more than can be said,
I couldn't tell you on the phone,
What kind of hypocrit am I,
I love our friendship and cherish it more than all,
But I just wish I could take this to the next step with you,
I can't live this way much more,
I must tell you this or die in distress,
I have liked you more than you could know,
What I need you to realize,
Is that song Realize is really for you,
I thought I would ask you this,
Before it eats me alive,
It has been on my mind,
Ever since that day of the pajamas and the animals,
Can we make this movie of life be called,
You and I,
I will promise you a red red rose,
On your doorstep for admission to this movie,
I just want my movie,
To be with you,
To play on,
Hand in hand with you,
I just want a closer life with you,
You should know that,
Some days my heart is afire,
From the affection I have for you,
As if and day; any moment,
It will combust into flames and emers,
And unyielding passion that cannot be,
Stopped or shoved away,
If I did touch you today,
It would not be as if I owned you,
It would be as I hold this pen in my hand,
Or an artist his brush,
As part of myself,
All I can say has been said,
I can think of no better way to say,
That I think beauty was defined,
When I looked in your eyes,
And all I want to know is,
Will you except my rose?




Copyright © Asatru ... [ 2004-01-22 15:31:46]
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Re: -My Rose- (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 04:38:42 PM AEST
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Groovy, but only a week? Well, you definitely like this girl. On another note, I read your comments on devon's work. I laughed my ass off; you made some very good points.


Re: -My Rose- (User Rating: 1 )
by hawaii06 on Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 05:30:37 PM AEST
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This is so sweet...and she only stayed with you for a week? If I knew a guy liked me like that and they were my friend...I would be with them forever...because that is so sweet and deep...and personal...That was very good...Keep it up...NEVER QUIT WRITING!!!!!!!
Jamie


Re: -My Rose- (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 05:44:59 PM AEST
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beautiful expression of feelings and lovely poem, i think you should show it to her:) hugs n' love nessa




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