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Tranquil death
Contributed by
forever_lonely
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Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 02:49:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Dying Flowers
Elegance, water trickles
From the bud
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forever_lonely
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2004-01-22 14:49:30]
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Re: Tranquil death
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by fallen_eyes on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 02:56:18 PM AEST
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| as i already told ya i like it its shot full of tranquility but has a subtle deadly sense to it. keep it up. luv ya T x |
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Re: Tranquil death
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by Necromant on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 04:00:13 PM AEST
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This is the shortes poem i'd ever read but it has a certain appeal. I could picture a rain drop falling from the petal of a dying flower, so sad and tranquil as you wrote in the title. I liked it,
Anne :D |
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Re: Tranquil death
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 05:28:48 PM AEST
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| sweet:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Tranquil death
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by jme on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 12:21:25 PM AEST
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| Simple words. Very beautiful. |
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Re: Tranquil death
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by Empty_Soul on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 05:17:40 PM AEST
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good first attempt at the old haiku. hard to write those little buggers.
keep on fighting
never stop writing
John |
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