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A Rose For You
Contributed by
MissLee
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Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 01:03:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
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My heart is drenched in a sea of tears
From all those painful years
Last year will be on my mind forever
But as we go through this life together
I would like to say
Thank you for helping me yesterday
You are all so beautiful and kind
I am at ease in my mind
For the while being
But I hope to be seeing
A better day on the morrow
I will not take my life today or tomorrow
Do not worry I am here
Though my heart sheds many a tear
I am thankful for all of you
And I would like to
Give a Rose to all of you
For what you the other day did do
I am not this earth leaving
But for my life I am grieving
For the only place I like being is here
For my poetry is to my heart near
And friendship with all of you grows
And stems from my heart like a rose
But little do you see
There are two roses that grow inside of me
One is red, for my life has some joyous times
occasionally
One is black, from a wasted love
I thank you all gratefully
But he will never look at me from where he stands up above
Thank you for your help it is most appreciated
But I have long debated
Whether I am worth being on this Earth
For the times are few that bring mirth
Thank you all again
Even though I am in pain
I am thankful I have all of you
And I give this rose to you
Copyright ©
MissLee
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2004-01-22 13:03:16]
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Re: A Rose For You
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 01:13:26 PM AEST
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Truly beautiful made me cry so heartfelt and full of love
I loved how you added the rose
Brilliant
Keep smiling hun
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: A Rose For You
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by whisper-of-night on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 01:14:07 PM AEST
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| Don't need to thanks me, all I want to see is you smile again, it is only a pity that there are not much I could do, or is it?? If you want, you can tell me about it......... I know one would always go through some hard times in the life, even me, I was considered suicide myself at one point! But I did not give up that easily, and hey! You see here I am, try to smile and offer you my helping hand! So, take good care of that red rose and let it bloom, and let the black one wither....... |
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Re: A Rose For You
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by Kie on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 01:32:22 PM AEST
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| I was feeling deeply emotional and sappy this morning. Now I have racoon eyes, because you made me cry. Good tears though. You know what? You have more strength than you know and the next time life gets to overwhelming, remember how precious we think you are. Kie |
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Re: A Rose For You
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by ShadowDaughter on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 01:43:20 PM AEST
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I second that. Great poem, thanks for the mention . . . we all care about you here at YPDC. Remember that, if you ever feel this way again: we care about you, and it would be a shame to have you leave us. :)
--Nora |
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Re: A Rose For You
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by AliB on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 03:04:59 PM AEST
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I agree with all that has been said, the only real thanks we want is for us to see your poems on this site, that way we know you're still fighting. I noticed a few positive thoughts in this poem, a good sign, take one day at a time and if you feel you are slipping let one of us know so that we can pull you back up, ok?
I think you are very brave just to ask for help, wish there were more like you !
All my love
Ali xx |
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Re: A Rose For You
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by jme on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 04:33:06 PM AEST
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| Great poem. Beautiful words! |
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Re: A Rose For You
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 12:02:42 AM AEST
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| This was a beautiful poem for such great people on this site! Bravo! Christina |
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Re: A Rose For You
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 08:25:22 AM AEST
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Awww, the pleasure was all mine. Just glad you feel a little better.
Very nice poem, so heartfelt. Loved it.
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: A Rose For You
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 04:28:44 PM AEST
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a rose right back at you kiddo, this one will always be right here like me so you know, you are not alone in your travails, these petals never wilt, colours always vibrant, you are a rose; wishing for happy growth under warmth of sun, may the only rain that falls upon you be the whistful gentle kind, whenever you need, hugs n' big love nessa
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