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Take Flight
Contributed by
ianthe
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Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 12:59:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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breathing in the water
skimming the the surface of the moon
flying on silver wings
I have gone without you
for you were grounded
by your heavy thoughts
and would not lay them down
afraid to fly and soar above
the very mountain tops
you loved to look upon
time and space are infinite
and we are but a single breath
ianthe 2004
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ianthe
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2004-01-22 12:59:07]
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Re: Take Flight
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 01:17:44 PM AEST
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breathing in the water
skimming the the surface of the moon
flying on silver wings
I have gone without you
for you were grounded
by your heavy thoughts
and would not lay them down
afraid to fly and soar above
the very mountain tops
you loved to look upon
Wonderful poem
Loved the words in this
Afraid to fly and soar above you loved to look upon
Beautiful
Love sweet angelxxxx
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Re: Take Flight
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by MajesticPoet on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 02:03:36 PM AEST
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Very good write... Keep up the good work.
MaJ |
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Re: Take Flight
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by jme on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 02:36:21 PM AEST
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| Great wording. This poem is wonderful. |
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