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Talking to an angel
Contributed by
forever_lonely
on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 09:18:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Im talking to an angel
Looking down on thee
'There are so many reason my friend'
To try and set you free
Im talking to an angel
Hes smiling back at me
'This wish you ask is just to much'
To try and set them free
Im talking to an angel
Explaining it should be
'A life of pain from deep within'
Just set this person free
Im talking to an angel
He nods right back at me
'A friend you are in everyway'
I'll set this person free
Im talking to an angel
Smiling down on thee
'This is my gift to you my friend'
From an angel named loki
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Re: Talking to an angel
(User Rating: 1 ) by Necromant on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 10:51:11 AM AEST (User
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Aww how sweet! This poem is very good! I liked it!
Anne :D |
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Re: Talking to an angel
(User Rating: 1 ) by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 01:23:53 PM AEST (User
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Fantastic poem
Felt like I was there talking to him myself
Great imagination brill
Love sweetangelxxx |
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Re: Talking to an angel
(User Rating: 1 ) by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 12:05:35 AM AEST (User
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I talk to angels all the time So I enjoyed this write! Great job! Christina |
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Re: Talking to an angel
(User Rating: 1 ) by Putteragain on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 01:00:06 PM AEST (User
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very sweet and innocent i love it
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Re: Talking to an angel
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cobalt on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 09:41:31 PM AEST (User
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This was a very good poem. The ending was interesting. Loki. |
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Re: Talking to an angel
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 07:54:02 PM AEST (User
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beautifully written, luke, your talent shines here my friend, hugs n' love nessa
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