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A CRY FOR..........
Contributed by
JenimaeMalinaHaloisi
on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 06:18:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I am sorry if my poetry does suck,
If I was there I would to have you read it give you a buck,
Or two,
Or a few,
I write from the heart,
That it where my poetry does start,
I wish to fly,
I wish to die
I hate my life and almost always have felt that way,
I don't know what to say,
There is only one who makes me feel good I think of him everyday,
But he is gone now and he is far away,
I wish to die,
I wish to fly,
That is me,
Jenimae Malina Haloisi
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2004-01-21 18:18:51]
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Re: A CRY FOR..........
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by Stalkee on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 07:43:06 PM AEST
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| im not sure what to say about this (i mean that in a good way) its a sad write...sorry to hear you feel this way =/ |
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Re: A CRY FOR..........
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 07:45:33 PM AEST
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My dear friend poetess,
I'm so sorry dear, that no one has commented on your beautiful pieces of your heart!
Your poetry is real, alive, honest, and please survive!
I enjoyed every line Jenimae, please forgive me for not commenting every day.
For my heart too is generous, and if only I could, I'd comment on every single poem that passes my way!
Try not to be sad.........write of beauty and love...it will warm your heart, and send you flying way above,
I love you,
Lovingcritters
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Re: A CRY FOR..........
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 09:44:24 PM AEST
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| I think your poetry is fine. Its from you heart, you express how you feel and interpret that to the reader. Hang in there, in time you'll get more comments. Kie |
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Re: A CRY FOR..........
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 01:25:27 AM AEST
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| sorry hon in truth i have been out of it for the past couple of days. i commented on the one before this which was good. im just lost right now lol. what fun. |
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