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The sun does not shine on me
Contributed by
JenimaeMalinaHaloisi
on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 06:10:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Oh why can you all not see
That the sun does not shine on me
It nevert has and never will
I hide in darkness still
My life is wasted and a useless endevor
I should have been born never
As I melt from the pain
My heart cries out again and again
"Leave me be,
Can't you see?
Let me die
Let my spirit fly!"
Copyright ©
JenimaeMalinaHaloisi
... [
2004-01-21 18:10:41]
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Re: The sun does not shine on me
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 06:18:50 PM AEST
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| But what a waste that would be! The sun shines on your poetry! Keep up the good work! |
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Re: The sun does not shine on me
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by KittyVamp on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 02:44:44 AM AEST
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| I for one would prefer you stay among us. This pain you're experiencing can only be temporary.. it may be in a group, or a continuing series, but the old cliche is true "What doesn't kill you makes you stronger" Believe me, it's true. |
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Re: The sun does not shine on me
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 01:23:22 AM AEST
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| i really liked this one. it was good. i feel that way often anymore. that i just want to be free of life. ah well its not gonna happen. |
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