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Living for Today
Contributed by
jme
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Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 04:26:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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My past is just my stepping stones
Leading me somewhere, yet unknown
No looking back on where I've been
Shedding yesterday Revealing new skin
In search of desires not easily obtained
A path lead afar, my heart must explain
Tomorrow I'll change, become someone new
Peel away another layer Uncovering I'm not sure who
Exposing my soul each hour, each day
Forward with my journey, fate is leading my way
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jme
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2004-01-21 16:26:05]
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Re: Living for Today
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by hawaii06 on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 04:28:13 PM AEST
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Good poem....Keep writing...
Jamie |
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Re: Living for Today
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 05:28:43 PM AEST
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| This flowed so well and it blended from one word to the next. Although short, perfectly written. Kie |
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Re: Living for Today
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 05:37:16 PM AEST
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Lovely flow of thoughts.....
Enjoyed this a lot...Jenni |
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Re: Living for Today
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 07:08:00 PM AEST
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| I really like your outlook on things. Your thoughts flow nicely together too, keep writing. |
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Re: Living for Today
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by Necromant on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 11:24:23 AM AEST
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Wow very good imagery! I loved this poem. It has a positive attitude, in a way. .. I loved this one Great write!!
Anne :D |
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Re: Living for Today
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by Remi on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 03:54:23 AM AEST
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| Very good writing I like the way u express yourself this is very sweet |
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