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I'm cold!
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 02:24:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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i'm cold, too cold from living,
to bord, from giving,
to dead from trying,
to lifeless from crying....
to scared from fighting,
to sore from biting,
to hurt to be bothered,
so sad i'm covered,
in a darkened coating,
which leaves me gloating,
for days at a time,
my eyes sting, from rubbed in chuncks of lime!
well i guess that's it,
i'm falling in a bottomless pit,
my time has come, i can no longer cry!
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2004-01-21 14:24:47]
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Re: I'm cold!
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by hawaii06 on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 03:52:24 PM AEST
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| This is very good and I see where you're coming from....Keep writing this is a very good poem... |
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Re: I'm cold!
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 08:08:59 PM AEST
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| I love the repetition in here... this is really good.... if you spell-checked it would have been awesome! |
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