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LOVE AND HATE
Contributed by
sweetangeluk
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Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 01:59:06 PM in AEST
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As a small child auntie I would totter across the road
We played our favourite game it was our secret code
You knew my secret hiding place always found me there
Loved you then as I do now with such tender loving care
Would sit me at your table in my little red coat and hat
Called my little red riding hood, always a welcome mat
Four others sat in between all wanting your attention
The selfish one came later the one to create such tension
We continued to stay in touch I stayed often with you
Work for the family business you said think things through
Lost within a sea of torment as waves pounded at my door
My mind a whirl, thoughts as deep as the ocean floor
Here I am now a few miles apart never a heartbeat away
Invites to parties now declined, in a well mannered way
For things have now changed there is a spoke in the wheel
My pride and honour still in tacked not under achilles' heel
A selfish and evil cousin many times to corrupt my soul
The love and beauty we shared to her was a theatrical role
The demon and the angel, they say revenge is sweet
Heaven and hell cousin, just a heart full of deceit
To me no longer of importance she has ceased to be
Along with the family business, to the highest degree
We used to speak of secrets and hug each other tight
No longer in the theatrical limelight poor queen of the night
Love
xxAngelxx
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sweetangeluk
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2004-01-21 13:59:06]
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Re: LOVE AND HATE
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by baby-d on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 03:32:20 PM AEST
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| i love it, it is good keep up the good work |
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Re: LOVE AND HATE
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 05:33:49 PM AEST
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| Wow, this was so incredibly expressive. I love the way you wrote it and the story you told. Kie |
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Re: LOVE AND HATE
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by emystar on
Monday, 26th January 2004 @ 01:36:39 AM AEST
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Very good write.
It's sad that things go this way at times but it seems u r handling it with dignaty.
Life is very surprizing some days.
I know what cha mean about thinking u know someone and then realize it was just a facode.
Hang tuff, friend and keep the poems comming. I'm trying to play catch up on my comments etc.
huggs, luv,
Thanks for your great comments on my work. |
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Re: LOVE AND HATE
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by Archie on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 12:14:56 PM AEST
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| This poem brings back a lot of bad memories for me. Your poem speaks of a reality i wish did not exist |
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