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On Black wings above a gray sea: A Suicide
Contributed by
MissLee
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Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 01:19:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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My life has become a nightmare
Of which is too pathetic to share
I want to die
To sleep for all eternity
I want to fly
On black wings above a gray sea
I want to soar
And remember this world no more
I want to live in a dream
Where my blood flows from my body like a stream
I want to scream
My life is lost I weep for a dream
Of what has been
I want to die
To sleep
To fly
To no longer weep
I want to fly on Black wings above a gray sea
For all eternity
I want to watch my friends lives unfold
To put away mine, for its sad story should never be told
I want to see them happy
I want to be free
To protect them on their life's journey
I want to die
To sleep
To fly
To let my blood into the ground seep
I want to live in the past
And I want it to forever last
I want to sleep for all eternity
On black wings above a gray sea
Copyright ©
MissLee
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2004-01-21 13:19:00]
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Re: On Black wings above a gray sea: A Suicide
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 02:19:43 PM AEST
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| dearest misslee, big hugs, i care for you and if you want to pm me please dont hesitate, sometimes talking about it helps, i was there too once upon a time, much love and more hugs, nessa |
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Re: On Black wings above a gray sea: A Suicide
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 05:46:32 PM AEST
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I absolutely love this. It's so sad, but the words are just beautiful. I know exactly how you feel, like you said to me. I don't know what to say to you to encourage you or make you feel better because I feel the same way. But I guess... I hope you hold on long enough to find something better that gives you reason to want to live. And I guess I hope the same thing for myself. Best wishes (I truly mean that),
~ Moonlit |
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Re: On Black wings above a gray sea: A Suicide
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by ShadowDaughter on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 06:59:37 PM AEST
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Wow, major image-receiving going on here . . . gonna keep that in my mind for a while.
Beautiful, vivid, thought-provoking poem here. 'Twas most impressive, remind me to check yours out more often.
--Nora |
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Re: On Black wings above a gray sea: A Suicide
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by a_bear on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 10:28:35 PM AEST
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| No. I can't let you. You were an inspiration when hardly anyone else was commenting. My life is serious ***** right now. My son is in rehab..my grandaughter just tried to commit suicide..I'm going through a really hard separation. (read the oven) Not only did my ex decide to do a re-model, but then he stiffed my nephew out of a couple grand. This was just yesterday...I want to say good bye too...but no matter who we are, someone needs us. Give me your phone # and we'll talk. I don't care where you live or what time it is. I need someone to chat with any way...I'm about to go off the deep end myself...WE could at least share. Won't you do that, please? |
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Re: On Black wings above a gray sea: A Suicide
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by whisper-of-night on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 11:13:17 PM AEST
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| Dear MissLee, I am just a new guy who came to the site, and already I am fascinated by your talent and cry about the way you see the world..... I don't really know what you are going through right now, and probably it is not something for me to ask, but I sincerely hope that you don't mean what you say in the poems, I can't say the things would definately end up good, but at least, while we are here, there is hope, and that is what led many people from darkness toward the light, so please, grab my hands, and let start walk........ |
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Re: On Black wings above a gray sea: A Suicide
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 02:31:51 AM AEST
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This is so beautiful. I would love to soar with you, wherever the path may lead. I wish I had some way to help, but I can say that you and your talent would be missed greatly.
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: On Black wings above a gray sea: A Suicide
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by KittyVamp on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 02:54:30 AM AEST
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| A talent like yours would truly be missed.. Such a drastic action, such a final solution to a temporary problem... When you hit rock bottom, there's no way to go but up. Please, while I know the idea is appealing, resist the temptation.. you would be missed. |
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Re: On Black wings above a gray sea: A Suicide
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by AliB on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 09:06:28 AM AEST
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Yes I agree with last comment I don't know you but I would miss you too. Please don't give into your feelings, try to be strong and take advantage of the people who are willing to help you, they truly mean it , there's no reason to feel alone, we are all here listening to you, I'm sure there's always spmeone on line who is willing to help you through the really bad bits, I'm one of them. Remember you are special, look at the comments you are getting, there's people who care, LET them care about you and help you through this. I'll be waiting for your next poem with anticipation, at least then we know you're still here, that would make a lot of people very happy !
All my love
Ali xx |
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Re: On Black wings above a gray sea: A Suicide
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by Kie on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 10:24:01 AM AEST
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| MissLee, although your words were well placed and poetically beautiful I must say there is no beauty to be found in suicide. The fantasy that you will soar and watch your friends lives is just a fantasy. The cold hard truth is you will have lost your life and your friends and family will bury you. People are reaching out to you, all you have to do is take a step, reach out your hand and talk to someone who cares for you and sees a unique talent. Right now you can't see anything ahead, but I promise you life won't be perfect but it will get better, this I know. Writing can be your greatest strength if you can let it go once you pen it to paper. Like the others, you may message me anytime, it's your choice. Hang in there, for you are more precious than you know. Kie |
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Re: On Black wings above a gray sea: A Suicide
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by SensitiveSoAbused on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 09:59:56 PM AEST
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Again I have looked in a mirror
and I have seen myself.
Lying in the grass,
I dream of nightmares
Oh sweet love of pain
It is my escape
this pain... I cannot escape from.
I wish had never been born
...every time a bell rings, an angel falls,
festers, and decays...
The phrase is not,
Give me freedom or give me death,
rather,
Give me Death, for it is Freedom. |
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Re: On Black wings above a gray sea: A Suicide
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by annabell on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 04:35:20 PM AEST
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| i myself want to end it all your poem is beautifull and i want to join you there. |
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