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an increasing urge
Contributed by
fallen_eyes
on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 09:46:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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The want for you seems so intense
The need for your touch makes me melt
I want to feel you stroking my skin
I love to hear you whisper my name
The want for you keeps increasing
The need for your kiss builds up the heat
My breathing seems to be so heavy
My voice soon becomes quite shakey
The want for you will never stop
The need for you will never end
My flesh beneath you soon tingles
My urge for you will only expand
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Re: an increasing urge
(User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 01:05:55 PM AEST
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Intense poem
Wonderful words
Really liked this
Well done
Love sweet angelxxx |
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Re: an increasing urge
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by forever_lonely on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 07:56:17 PM AEST
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Hey tam this is a really good write full of emotion and imagery the only thing is i never knew you felt that way... hehe j/k
i really like this hun keep up the great writes
Luke x x x |
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Re: an increasing urge
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by Butterat_Zool on
Thursday, 29th January 2004 @ 11:23:55 PM AEST
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| what great, fun, dirty PASSION! I like it. Butterat Zool. |
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Re: an increasing urge
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 12:37:11 AM AEST
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| Nicely written. I enjoyed this. |
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