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A Myriad Of Desires
Contributed by
Vitreous_Soul
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Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 07:08:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
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When there's darkness inside you can't repress it forever
Try as you might past emotions won't sever
Hopeless, pointless, an exhausting endeavor
If only it were as simple as throwing a switch or a lever
When your eyes meet injustice you cry and you scream
Look to the stars for a comforting gleam
The light of loneliness is eternal, or so it would seem
Wondering if another soul bathes in the same beam
Feeling powerless, not a thing you can do
Hard as you look, nothing comes into view
A concept understood by far too few
Light must break the void to let inner beauty shine through
Who will be steadfast, who will be loyal
I look up to the skies then straight down to the soil
Implore the world, who will quell this turmoil
Guide a blackened soul back to this mortal coil
So many to tell you that you're loving and great
They say it'll come, be patient and wait
They don't realize that at this blindingly fast rate
Life will pass by, and you'll catch it too late
Buried deep within
There lies a diminishing brilliance
In consuming darkness it still burns
In vain it shines
For this light holds no warmth
For this glacial soul
There is but one prayer
Spoken to a heavenless sky
"I need somebody to be my beacon
My shooting star on a cloudy night
My angel to come and make it alright
I need somebody to catch me
A heart with love to enter my sight
To end this fall and help me take flight"
So many wishes spawned from one desire
The need for a spark to re-ignite the fire
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Vitreous_Soul
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2004-01-21 07:08:44]
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Re: A Myriad Of Desires
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 07:16:09 AM AEST
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| so true, so many let life pass them by, your inner beauty certainly shines through, lovely poetry:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: A Myriad Of Desires
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 08:15:41 AM AEST
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Wow, this is very good.
Awesome, very creative.
Luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: A Myriad Of Desires
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by Necromant on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 11:39:46 AM AEST
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Oh my god! What an amazing poem!!! WoW! I'm really stunned!.......wow, so very true! Very vivid imagery! The words are fabulous, very vivid. This poem transfers a lot of stirng emotions! Great work keep it up!!
Anne :) |
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Re: A Myriad Of Desires
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 01:19:16 PM AEST
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It only takes one word to sum up your poem
Magnificent
But i will add some more as it is worthy of the best
Amazing and fantastic words it flowed so well
Great talent beyond compare
Love Sweet angelxxxxxx |
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Re: A Myriad Of Desires
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 03:01:01 PM AEST
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| This was so touching to read. Time seems to pass on by and I wonder all the things you do. Your writing is breathtaking and I must read it again and again. Higher than a ((5)) in my opinion. Kie |
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Re: A Myriad Of Desires
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by Eve on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 03:42:16 PM AEST
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It's the waiting that's hard.
But even harder when Life ends up passing you by anyway.
Love it.
Keep writing,
-Eve. |
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Re: A Myriad Of Desires
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by forever_lonely on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 08:02:49 PM AEST
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well it seems my friends you have stepped into a state of poetic aura because this was magnificent, i truely do wonder sometimes if you are watching my life on video, the poem.. full of beauty and creative genius, your prayer is so true everything about this poem is astonshing
excellent write one of my most favorite peices by you
keep up the great work
luke |
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