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Life
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Jarmen_Kell
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Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 06:40:38 AM in AEST
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Re: Life
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by blueheart on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 06:45:26 AM AEST
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| Wow, intresting. Too bad I cant understand the language. |
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Re: Life
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 07:07:14 AM AEST
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| Very lovely indeed..:>) |
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Re: Life
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 08:30:47 AM AEST
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| is that arabic? sorry can't understand it... it looks pretty though... :) |
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Re: Life
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by Mad-Mancunian on
Wednesday, 11th February 2004 @ 05:13:10 AM AEST
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Yep. It's Arabic all right, albeit a bit lopsided, and misspelt. 2nd last line should be, "waw ra-ba-nun...", not "waw ra-nun-ba..." There is also a fa missing one dot, so sorry.
But if you prefer English works, you can check this account. It's my old one, but I'm sure you'd enjoy it.
Maoassalama, ila liqaa. |
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Re: Life
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 03:10:34 AM AEST
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hey jarmen,
beautiful, BEAUTIFUL poem...
again, very strong images and excellen flow..
you said about the second line it should be "waw-ra-ba-nun" and instead , you said, you wrote it as "waw-ra-nun-ba" or sumtin...
but i think you wrote it the right thing ddin't ya?
i mean the letter "wa/waw" is there, then you've gotta "ra" then you've got a "ba" and you've got the "shaddi" on top...then you've got the "nan" and the "aleaf", you know the long "a" sound. so i think that it IS right isn't it?
corect me if i'm mistaken...
wow, guess we're loners in this language...
bleh...
and i'm not even middle-eastern or anything lol, i just got interested in the language one day and took it up...
but nonetheless magnificent poem...
i STILL want to know more about ya... |
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Re: Life
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 08:23:08 PM AEST
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| yes i wish i could understand this as well. =] |
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