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When I look back
Contributed by
hope
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Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 12:36:00 AM in AEST
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Struggling struggling in this world
Painful memories all unfold
Years of anguish take their toll
Words of anger are all I hold
All my dreams are quickly shattered
Inside my heart has been beaten and battered
Loneliness fills these empty chambers
Without any hope what am I made of?
To think that was where I was
To see that my life was so undone
To be given the hope of something more
To know who I was really made for
To be held in the palm of his hand
And to know that it is all for his plans
To be filled with love that cannot compare
To know my heart is fully repaired
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Re: When I look back
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 12:45:17 AM AEST
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| wow great poem! good write! |
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Re: When I look back
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by desertwispers on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 02:38:20 AM AEST
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feelings I relate to well done
crystal michelle |
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Re: When I look back
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 05:36:01 AM AEST
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Great write.
It's always good to know your heart has healed.
huggs, luv,
emy |
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Re: When I look back
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by blueheart on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 06:31:12 AM AEST
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| I'm glad you've overcome it. Wonderful write. |
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Re: When I look back
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 01:10:22 AM AEST
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WOW! This is a REALLY good poem, Hope.
Take care.
David |
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Re: When I look back
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 23rd January 2004 @ 09:54:06 PM AEST
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| beautiful words from a beautiful heart. |
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Re: When I look back
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by amandadawn1982 on
Monday, 2nd February 2004 @ 05:07:51 PM AEST
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Great poem. You kept the flow going throughout the whole thing. Great expression of feelings written in those words.
Hope to read more
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