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Catch up
Contributed by
frozensuicide
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Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 12:12:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Every time you walk away,
I stop trying to catch up.
I'm tired of falling behind,
And so I’ve walked a new way.
You say I walk away from you,
Well you are just blind.
I'm tired of catching up,
So I'm leaving you behind.
New friends, new ends,
Tied up into knots.
Am I mad at you?
No I am not.
But every time you walk away,
I’ve given up trying to catch up.
Some others accept me,
They wait for me if I fall behind.
So just forget about me, its what you do best,
Just keep walking right up to the rest.
Don’t worry, I won’t catch up,
I give up to easily.
i dont mind being left behind,
but i am tired of trying to find where you went,
where you decided to go, im tired out of my
mind,
of being ignored.
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Re: Catch up
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 12:53:00 AM AEST
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| Good write! being ignored sucks, but good write and good luck! |
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Re: Catch up
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by Kittie on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 01:00:21 AM AEST
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| im not going to say the usual " i can relate" although i can alot could i really liked this one it made sense to me and not alot can do that lol =P~ great write hon!! i guess you can look at it as being ignored and i did care about image once but i let it all slip... and i must say i dont feel like sh^tt no more! but like mentioned theres those who dont ignore you and we to often dont see that and im happy with my little circle of weird friends and to those who ignore me ^^ pokes out her tongue and sticks her finger up ^^ ;o) hope all is well for you ~~ great write again ~~ |
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Re: Catch up
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by desertwispers on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 02:40:29 AM AEST
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being ignored does suck I must agree stick out your tongue and go foo on you
crystal michelle |
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Re: Catch up
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 13th February 2004 @ 12:07:18 AM AEST
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| I liked this. It was very good. I can relate to this one. |
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