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21 Revolver digging my garden
Contributed by
snow24
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Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 08:00:06 PM in AEST
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21 Revolver digging my garden
Living in a one shot Paris, circular vison appears square on the well's neck and back, but I'm not sure, just a miserable old *******
1st of June the ice chills my thighs, treasonic patriots are boxing in their dashing reds and blue skies, the ground is balding, receding grass line
Whiskey jokes echoing from the A.M., there's chili on the counter, prom queen's sore from the act, an american fantasy less than it would seem
Capri's half-off, from Parguay, stubley legs shine from the dusty ball fields, sex-packs and screaming hot-dogs sizzle on your canadian *****, shoot the tail on a honkey
21 Revolver digging my garden
Death is such a buzz kill, you can play that two ways, like an abadoned street, t-ball with your feet, an american fantasy less than it would seem
21 Revolver digging my garden
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Re: 21 Revolver digging my garden
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by spiffyphil on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 03:38:23 AM AEST
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This poem - in its darkness (as I see it) is sincere and brilliant. Great job snow, I like this style VERY much, keep it up and it will grow.
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Re: 21 Revolver digging my garden
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by Khosrow on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 08:41:23 PM AEST
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| Interesting. I like the enviroment setting for the poem, brings it out really well. |
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Re: 21 Revolver digging my garden
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 02:45:58 PM AEST
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| Interesting... It was cool. |
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