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Tainted Emulation-noitalumE detniaT
Contributed by
fallen_eyes
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Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 07:28:43 PM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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When I look into the mirror
I wonder if it's me I see
Do I see the same as you?
Or do i just see who i want to be?
When I look into the mirror
I wonder what you see of me
Does what I see seem true?
Do you really understand that of she?
When i look into the mirror
I wonder whats the key
Do I really know what i should do?
Do I let you now come and see?
When you look into my mirror
You wonder what you should see
Do you see the pain that I now do?
Do you think I will be free?
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Re: Tainted Emulation-noitalumE detniaT
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by angel_ride2002 on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 07:39:15 PM AEST
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| Hi, i think ur poem is wonderful. i love the way u express ur emotion in it , its deep. |
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Re: Tainted Emulation-noitalumE detniaT
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by forever_lonely on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 08:02:24 PM AEST
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hey hun this is really an amazing write so very very deep and full of emotion, i love your style always have and always will hehe
luv ya always
Sausage
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Re: Tainted Emulation-noitalumE detniaT
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 08:04:25 AM AEST
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There is no more penetrating a gaze than looking into oneself. Deep, complex, great poem.
Truly,
-V.S. |
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Re: Tainted Emulation-noitalumE detniaT
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by Empty_Soul on
Sunday, 1st February 2004 @ 11:09:55 AM AEST
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hey pickle, when i look into your mirror i see beauty and a very talented young woman! amazing poem, really like this one.
Mr Tickle Bum (lmao) xx |
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Re: Tainted Emulation-noitalumE detniaT
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 10:58:04 AM AEST
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| This was an interesting poem... Yeah... I think it was really well done. Nice job. |
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