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Back to Your Heart
Contributed by
MrWrite
on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 06:06:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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Listen to me,
please.
Tell me the words
to say, I'll say them.
Anything you want,
it's yours.
Just tell me
what to do!
I'll do anything
for you...
how couldn't I
do anything
fo you?
I don't want you
to leave me!
Can't you see that?
Just give me a chance
to prove it to you,
that's all I ask.
If after that,
you don't want
to look at me
ever again,
that's alright.
I just want to try
to find a way
back to your heart.
Copyright ©
MrWrite
... [
2004-01-20 18:06:45]
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Re: Back to Your Heart
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by hawaii06 on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 06:13:50 PM AEST
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| very thoughtful and well said...If you wrote it for someone I hope they followed it and agve you a chance... |
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Re: Back to Your Heart
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 10:51:50 PM AEST
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| If I could tell you how many tearful nights I have prayed for those very words it would amaze you. I -LOVED- this poem and whoever the lucky person is you should give it to them. It is really very touching. Kie |
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Re: Back to Your Heart
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by Remy on
Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 08:20:14 PM AEST
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If only I had the gall to say these words to someone, then perhaps I could get somewhere! I love the way this reads, sounds like something I would write down and never say,.,., lol.
~Remy~ |
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Re: Back to Your Heart
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 06:35:36 AM AEST
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| Written simply and at the same in such an unique way... As I am now in a position of a person asking for a second chance, I can really feel what you are saying... and hope this poem will touch the heart it's dedicated to! Good luck.. VanyaT |
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Re: Back to Your Heart
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 10th February 2004 @ 10:32:40 AM AEST
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| I enjoyed. Lol. I think it was well written and I could definetly relate. |
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