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Portrait of Pain
Contributed by
deadly_blaZe
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Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 05:52:22 PM in AEST
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Ill take a knife and press it to your wrist,
Ill dip my paintbrush in your scarlet bliss,
Stand before you with triumph in my eyes
and paint you beautiful, as u slowly lose ur life..
Ill cover up every sin and every scar,
Repaint your memories of past and present wars,
Hide all faces that were smotherd in deceit,
Ill paint you as a whole until every end meets...
And when every brushstroke is done with its journey
And you can no longer take a breath
Ill step away and put down my paintbrush,
pick up my knife,
... and paint myself beautiful
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deadly_blaZe
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2004-01-20 17:52:22]
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Re: Portrait of Pain
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by hawaii06 on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 05:55:09 PM AEST
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| This is a very sad poem...but it is very good... |
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Re: Portrait of Pain
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by Cancer on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 12:04:29 AM AEST
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***** skittles. that was incredible. very graphic and a nice story as well.
"pick up my knife,
... and paint myself beautiful"
those two lines were the best. great scrawl.
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Re: Portrait of Pain
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 6th February 2004 @ 08:11:28 PM AEST
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wow this was amazing very strongly worded... I could almost feel the strength of your depression which spawned this. This was beautiful. I loved it.
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