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Hell's Winter
Contributed by
remy
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Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 05:50:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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with another "how are you doing today?"
you already know it so don't ask me
could we meet up in a place any place?
provided you've still a sweeter taste
still i wish to tear down this wall
still it seems i'm making my downfall
well who are you and what do you choose?
forget about it let's just cut loose
and i can almost smile...
this is better than i've been in a better while
such a calming rain...
it reminds me tomorrow doesn't hold my pain
spilling "what are you going to do?"
for today i really wish that i knew
would you get alarmed at some silence?
you know i'm trying to get past this
then there's the trying moments left
then i couldn't tell you what's next
will you join me dear on the trip?
don't answer that mindless head spin
and i can almost cry...
this is better than yesterday was i won't lie
such a bitter rain...
it reminds me tomorrow could be the same
well you know...
one day i'll forgive you but not on the phone
don't tell me to let go...
one day i may but for now i hope that i don't
and i can almost see...
what am i looking for beyond this mirror of me
time to play in rain...
forget tomorrow, think on the fragile today
Copyright ©
remy
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2004-01-20 17:50:09]
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Re: Hell's Winter
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by MrWrite on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 06:20:16 PM AEST
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| Wow. Very powerful words. Keep sharing. |
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Re: Hell's Winter
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 20th January 2004 @ 06:46:07 PM AEST
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| A good strong poem, I enjoyed reading it. |
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Re: Hell's Winter
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 07:56:11 PM AEST
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| This is so beautiful....full of hope, even with the tinge of sadness... I like. :) |
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